Wednesday, December 7, 2011

One for All and All for Me


          Remember those days when you were young and your mother or father would take you to the store and give you five bucks? “Choose wisely,” they may have admonished and left you to stare at the shelves in wonder, holding that crisp five dollar bill and feeling the weight of the world on your shoulders. Five dollars is not a lot of money and even a small purchase would wipe out most of it. Should you save it? The latest Transformer was right in front of you and it was calling your name. But not only would that use all of your money, you would need a small loan from the parental unit that dragged you into the situation in the first place. Out of the corner of your eye, you spot to aforementioned parent lumbering toward you. Time for decision is running out. With a sigh, you recall the last time you asked for a loan. Not only did you get shut down, you received a lecture on fiscal responsibility – well, the seven-year-old appropriate version of a fiscal responsibility lecture. Unwilling to walk out of the store empty-handed, you reach for the 98 cent yoyo. It doesn’t matter that you already own five of them; it is the only item on the shelf that will allow you the satisfaction of a purchase and leave you with enough left over so that you can purchase the Transformer the next time you are given money to go shopping.
            This decision process is something that the average adult no longer has to go through. The concept of walking out of a store without the item that you really and truly wanted – or at least thought you wanted – is nearly obsolete. The creation of the credit card has allowed members of society to throw caution to the wind. Not having cash on hand is no longer a problem; credit cards let you make purchases without having to worry about the paycheck that you’ve already spent.
Every year, the average American household has a credit card debt of between 5% and 12% of their income.[1] Only 16% of this debt is paid each month on average.[2]  So while Americans are filling their homes with knick-knacks and products that have the potential to increase the ease of their lives, they are increasing the risk of losing their homes due to bankruptcy.  A majority of Americans are spending so much of their future earnings that they are beginning to spend their retirement funds.[3] Credit was not always used so recklessly. In colonial America, credit was used to aid in the purchases of everyday items. In those times, towns were smaller and the owners of produce stands and general stores knew their customers’ names and addresses. Credit was a way for busy mothers to send their children to the market without having to worry about doling out correct change. The bill was paid off weekly and it socially unacceptable to carry large amounts of debt.
Credit since then has ballooned into a large crisis. We’ve gotten so used to having what we want when we want it how we want it that denying ourselves to preserve our future is a difficult concept. Instantaneous gratification dulls the true sense of joy of obtaining something that you had to work hard and save for. Credit card companies have induced this false sense of kingliness in which we feel that there is no reason to stop us from having what we want. This sense of entitlement is perpetrating a debt crisis. Instead of our purchases enhancing our lives, they are adding to our stress levels and contributing to America’s financial situation.

Tuesday, December 6, 2011

small object, LARGE SUBJECT prewrite


Remember those days when you were young and your mother or father would take you to the store and give you five bucks? “Choose wisely,” they may have admonished and left you to stare at the shelves in wonder, holding that crisp five dollar bill and feeling the weight of the world on your shoulders. Five dollars is not a lot of money and even a small purchase would wipe out most of it. Should you save it? The latest Transformer was right in front of you and it was calling your name. But not only would that use all of your money, you would need a small loan from the parental unit that dragged you into the situation in the first place. Out of the corner of your eye, you spot to aforementioned parent lumbering toward you. Time for decision is running out. With a sigh, you recall the last time you asked for a loan. Not only did you get shut down, you received a lecture on fiscal responsibility – well, the seven-year-old appropriate version of a fiscal responsibility lecture. Unwilling to walk out of the store empty-handed, you reach for the 98 cent yoyo. It doesn’t matter that you already own five of them; it is the only item on the shelf that will allow you the satisfaction of a purchase and leave you with enough left over so that you can purchase the Transformer the next time you are given money to go shopping.
            This decision process is something that the average adult no longer has to go through. The concept of walking out of a store without the item that you really and truly wanted – or at least thought you wanted – is nearly obsolete.

Tuesday, November 1, 2011

first thoughts

To be honest, Dr.Lay, i have not thought about my draft for project 2 because i suffer from this disease called procrastination. It causes me to occasionally wonder about the work which shall be due soon without actually attempting to start work. but to be serious, i find that my best writing is done under pressure.

Thursday, October 27, 2011

and from the ashes of a wedding...

i find it fitting that beatrice and bennidick's love flourishes in the aftermath of of hero and claudio's failed wedding. their's is a love that almost thrives on misunderstanding and chaos. it's that that wonderful fictional beast, the phoenix. It rises from ashes as something new and bold and beautiful.

let's talk about family disfunction

i should hope that in the case where i am accused of doing something dreadful that my father would give me the benefit of the doubt. that he would at least take a moment to recollect his wits and think rationally about the situation. "i know this to be true about my beloved daughter..." or something along those lines. rather than assume that the bearers of mine sordid tale held absolute truth and, in his rage, attempt to choke the life out of me for my transgression.

let us cogitate on the customs in the time period of, Much Ado About Nothing. while sex was a much more open and less taboo thing than it is now, sex out of marriage wasn't really something that happened a lot. and that could have been for a number of reasons. maybe because they married so much younger than we do now they didn't really have the urge or the opportunity to have sex outside of marriage. so when claudio accuses hero of having been clever enough to find the time and the lust to do just that, it really says something. remember, that family honor was everything and hero's indiscretion has brought shame upon her father and her upbringing. marriages weren't really for love, they were more sociopolitical contracts. no one wants to enter into contract with someone who is know for doing dirty business. if your daughter has a habit of sneaking around with men who are not her betrothed, no other family is going to want to make a fool of themselves by attaching themselves to you and your out of control household. if we consider all of these, then leonato's actions [trying to kill hero after he is told of her so-called promiscuity] seem much more in context.

i don't think that i can defend the claim that this announcement returns the play to the status quo because, even for shakespeare, this seems a bit over the top.

Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Real Talk [Sonnet II]

when you're 40
and the wrinkles have begun to take over your face
the way you looked when you were young and pretty
will be a distant memory of the past
like the fashion of yesteryear
then, when they ask you, "what happened? Where'd all your good looks go?"
you'll have to say, with your deeply shadowed eyes,
"I wasted my youth on myself
I never found anyone else..."
looking back, your stunning beauty would have been so much more astonishing
if you could point to your kid and and say,
"They're just as beautiful as I was, maybe even more,"
then perhaps,we could imagine you to be just a little more beautiful than you really are.
Kids bring you joy in your old age.

Thursday, October 20, 2011

poor claudio

hero is pure and sweet and has something of a charm about her since she doesn't speak often. there isn't one thing that i can put my finger  on, but it's something in the way that claudio address her that alerts the viewer/reader that there could be something a little bit flaky about his affection. generally i'm a harsh cynic about love at first sight or infinite and lasting love after a week of interaction, but i'm even more so in claudio and hero's case. i feel that hero is much more shrewd than she let's on.

Tuesday, October 18, 2011

hide behind the reveler's mask

when in a masquerade, you can be anyone you want to be. you can be as bold as you'd never guessed yourself possible. there are no inhibitions. no one to recognize your face and send you scowls of disapproval. it's the sobers drunken revelry.

Tuesday, September 27, 2011

"sl" sounds

slick
slither
slit
slack
slant
slut
slide
slumber
slouch
sludge
slimy
sleek
slim

shakespeare's real woman

billy collins in "litany" and shakespeare in "sonnet 130" say the same thing, "i don't know what kind of women you hang around, but i haven't seen any supermodels in my house."  billy collins uses the reverse of the traditional form and shakespeare brings in the reality of the woman he loves.

"litany"

billy collins has a dry humor that i don't think would have come across had i simply read his poem for myself.his reading let me in on a sarcastic secret of his. when he performed it, he simply gave us the poem and nothing else. he let us in on a bit of his creative process and allowed us to form our own opinions.

fresh like dickinson

it's much harder to get a feel for the sound of "tell all the truth but tell it slant" because i don't know the way she spoke it as she wrote it. read by other people, the emphasis changes. for me, her writing is fresh because her message sits near the surface instead of being buried beneath twisting diction.

word [smithing]

shihan uses sprinklings of flash throughout his poem. i think that it's just enough to be effective. like mali, shihan uses his words to bring you in. if you truly want to understand what he's saying, you have to pay attention.

taylor mali through my ears

there is something that our eyes do for us, that our ears can not quite accomplish. they provide references to paint mental pictures too. video typography is a wonderful tool. words that before only washed over us, can now  make an even bigger impact as we watch their every placement. the rise and fall of quietly loud statements make themselves bold before us.

through the eyes of taylor mali

Taylor Mali uses more than just the words coming out of his mouth to convey his meaning. the inflection of his voice and the emphasis placed on certain words of his sentences allow us to develop a true sense of what his point is. He gives an example even as he tells you his position.

Thursday, September 22, 2011

man versus machine

the question on hand lately seems to be is technology good or bad. everyone seems to agree that it's useful, we just can't decide if we are enjoying the consequences. [although the word
"consequences" has such negative connotation, it quite literally simply means, "the effects"]. Michael Wesch created a very well put together infographic video to explain his views on the subject. feel free to take your time to familiarize or [re familiarize] yourself  with it.



now, he makes it clear that his opinion is that the "machine" that we call the internet is using us, but i feel that it's a symbiotic relationship. it can't gain any information unless we use it and the information that it does gain is used to swell the amount of options we have to look at. we use it and take the information that it offers and it feeds off of our use and takes our time. the internet opens up more and more avenues for different kinds of writers to jump into the game. people who found pen and paper stifling before and now find a more fluid way to express their thoughts. [which brings into question the quality of  writing and the dedication of these "new writers" to the craft of writing.] to put it into perspective, the internet is a machine made of people. we need people in our day-to-day life, we will probably always need people in our day-to-day life, and there will be days that we wish  to be people free. take those days in stride. if you feel that the internet [people] is becoming too much of a controlling force, then take a break and a breath.

Tuesday, September 20, 2011

connecting to the internet

This blog is for class, so I'm never sure what format to follow. Should I follow my traditional blogging style (where I generally ignore capitlisation rules)? Should I keep it academic? I really don't know. How should i introduce a topic that I've been assigned to write about? Jump right in? I guess I'll have to try out a lot of different ways and just stick with the one most comfortable to me.

That said,  i should really get back to the assignment at hand. we were talking about Adam Gopnik's piece, "...How The Internet Gets Inside Us".  Gopnik sorts people into these neat little catagories of the Better Nevers, the Never Betters, and the Ever Wasers. at first i was skeptical as to whether or not i would enjoy this article let alone find some thing to connect to. but, as i delved into the article i found several views that i could agree with, if not in whole, in part. Gopnik brought up some relevant topics and points of view.

later on, we reviewed Nicholas Carr's article, "Is Google Making Us Stupid?"  he too, brought up relevant topics and points of view, but i immediately  wanted to resist all that he had to offer because he started off by saying that the internet was destroying the general population's drive to read. now, i am an avid reader and  i feel like the internet fueled my passion rather than making me less inclined to read. however, i can relate to where he's coming from.

i have a couple of questions for Mr. Nicholas Carr (and anyone else who would care to cogitate upon the following),
  1.  Do you believe that "power reading" is degrading a love for reading the classics, which can't really be understood through skim reading?
  2. If the internet was not a factor, do you believe that that some other Force would continue to work upon the literary proficiency of the general population?
  3. What's wrong with being an "efficient" thinker?
  4. Do you feel that Google is trying to perpetrate a "group" or "collective" mind?
  5. There was a time when people said that the slow extinction of scripted handwriting would lead to the downfall of good, clear, cognitive thinking and the typewriter would hinder rather than help human thought.  i think that it's safe to say, for the most part, that this has yet to happen (at least due the the lack of script). Do you think that Google can push us further in that direction, or will this terrible revolution go the way of the typewriter?
  6. Why should we care about why or how or even if the internet is changing our thought processes and brains?

Thursday, September 8, 2011

Pantene Commercial Response

The deaf girl playing the violin is an essential part of the Pantene commercial. She presents a challenge - to the world, to the people around her, and to the viewers to dare to believe in her abilities. In retrospect, I suppose Pantene was trying to make a statement about how good beautiful hair can instill you with the confidence to overcome any obstacle, but didn't make it clear until the end.

This bothered me because I would have been more impressed with the commercial had they done more to show that this was their product. All in all, I think that perhaps they could have communicated their ideas better had they  reformatted the plot line just a little bit.

Crayon's Part Two

I guess that the right tool can make  the job more pleasant. Crayons proved difficult to write with and I think that discouraged a lot of people from wanting to write the well thought out essay they had devised in their mind. Writing is an important part of our communication process. That's why new and different ways to communicate keep evolving- to allow people of all levels and skills of communicating to get their point across. I know some writers are disappointed with the the way writing is evolving, but I think that it's a beautiful thing. I want more and more people to be able to share their thoughts and feelings in a way that comfortable to them.

Response to Crayon Assignment

To be quite honest, I did not enjoy the crayon assignment. Granted, when I first heard about it, I was quite excited. However, once I started, I realized that it was much harder than I had anticipated. The crayon dulled rather quickly and I found myself condensing most of my thoughts so that they could fit on the page. I felt that I could have done better; that I was using the properties of the crayon to take a shortcut. Perhaps, in the future, I'll learn from the experience and stop being a lazy writer.